Children's Story

I've got a ton of stories in my head, but only one that I can remember finishing. It was a children's story with my typical bizarre spin on it, and I've drawn it twice. Once when I first wrote it back sometime around late high school or early college, and then again when I first got here to New York, for my then-favored boss' kid's birthday. Now I think I want to redo it for my friends Robert and Ana, whose daughter Luna was just born. This is a sketch of the original character, but now that I look at her, she kinda looks like a fat version of Dora...