Shape 7

My list of drawings to do is getting longer and longer everyday, and I have yet to finish other pieces that I thought were a done deal! So I'm revisiting this piece and hopefully making headway to finishing it! I'm also revisiting it because I'm afraid it feels dated, and I'm trying desperately to rectify whatever is making it so. The hair and shapes are already very 80s even if they're back right now, but I wonder if the rendering style is way too 'fashion clip art?' You know, the type of illustration you see posted in dry cleaning windows, of the 'fashionable' types that would represent chicness? Anyhow, I added some detail and removed some too, plus I made his hair a bit poufier, a la Andrew Garfield...