Craned Neck 2

I was examining the stance of the neck in this drawing, as it represents a more modern pose of late since people actually have bad posture. But the man on the right ended up looking more mature, and I liked that, so I toyed with teh idea of adding some younger models for contrast. But I then decided, what if I keep them all older looking? We don't draw older men much anymore, and that might be a fun angle. Now if I can only decide on what they're wearing...