Ray in Repose, Done

I'm trying to finish this up and give it to Ray already! I think it might be too long in development for me to look at it objectively. But I'll hope to say, it's Done, versus, it's Perfect.

Edit: I did finally present it to Ray and he was so pleased, I couldn't make any changes right now. So edit: it's DONE, after nearly 2 years! Woohoo!