Clearer

What I drew yesterday was a little less subtle than what I had originally envisioned. I tried erasing and adjusting things that sometimes my mind tells me are fine and necessarily, but which eventually give way to a newer, better direction. I wanted the guy to look less shocked and more off-balance, less extreme. He's ended up younger-looking than I want, but not necessarily a bad direction, because I like the face enough. He looks a little more normal than my usual stylized, model-ish faces. I'll see about rounding him out less and aging him a bit...